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orzel-w Galactic Ambassador
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:09 pm Post subject: |
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Gord Green wrote: | I think part of the problem is we look at it from an engineering, draftsman's point of view while Bud views it from a more emotional point of view.
You and I see that the matte painting and most of the filmed perspectives as being in accord.
He sees where they vary in minute degrees from the actual set. |
(My thoughts exactly.)
Something else occurred to me overnight regarding the curved flight of stairs being open to the sky, as I drew in the alignment diagram. I forgot about the flat "patio cover" apron around the dome at the point where I drew the dome's circumference. That would cover the stairs! Duh!
And further thoughts about the lack of shadow on the forecourt from the dome overhang... As Bud pointed out, the various departments working on the film had their own specific focus. Since the floorplan didn't go into any second floor detail, the only thing the lighting crew (and I guess, the Director of Photography) had to go by in lighting the forecourt was the open radial rafters covered with china silk, and nothing above that. Therefore, no shadow cast by a dome.
The sets that were open on the near lower-right side -- Morbius' Study; Living Area/Dining Area; Krell Tunnel -- might not actually extend as far out on the "actual" house as the walls are drawn. The lengths of the walls toward the open ("fourth wall") side might be solely for freedom of camera positioning. They could pull the camera farther back for more coverage without fear of running out of side walls. (Bud closed off Morbius' study on this side narrower than the extent of the walls as well.) I'm also curious about the notation, "Wall Doubles" just below the Living/Dining areas. What does that mean to a cinematographer?
Lastly, in defense of Gord's reference to axes of the house, the floorplan does reference a Major Horizontal Axis "X" and Major Vertical Axis "Y". _________________ ...or not...
WayneO
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Bud Brewster Galactic Fleet Admiral (site admin)
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 4:54 pm Post subject: |
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Like you said, guys, I'm the one who approaches the subject "emotionally" (which I hope refers to my modest artistic skills).
So, consider these questions from All Sci-Fi's resident artist in our brilliant trio!
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What if the extension really WAS a driveway canopy? (That would be easier to paint than the more complex forecourt, and it has that bold and dramatic "Frank Lloyd Wright" look — especial when it's being viewed from a mile away!)
What if the house really was connected to a cliff? (That would make it more like the preproduction sketches, thus pleasing Arthur Lonergan.)
What if the pool was in back and over to the left, which is the correct location if the main entrance was the driveway canopy? (Heck, it might actually look cooler on that side! )
What if the artist had used the blueprint turned the way it's shown below as his guide . . . and he made a few changes by using what we call "artistic license". (Trust me, artist just LOVE to do that. )
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In other words . . . what if he'd rendered the painting like this?
~ Click on the jpeg to see the 1,600 pixel version.
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Is there no man on Earth who has the wisdom and innocence of a child?
~ The Space Children (1958)
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Gord Green Galactic Ambassador
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 5:27 pm Post subject: |
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Well done Bud!
Beautiful picture and it makes more agreement with the actual blueprint.
My only comment is there should be more vegetation behind the pool extending to the base of the mountain spires, but this angle would put the entrance in the front of the house facing the viewer, _________________ There comes a time, thief, when gold loses its lustre, and the gems cease to sparkle, and the throne room becomes a prison; and all that is left is a father's love for his child. |
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orzel-w Galactic Ambassador
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 8:58 pm Post subject: |
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As I was reading your "what if" section, before I scrolled down to the modified painting, I began thinking, "Bud needs to apply his artistic skills to create his own version of the matte painting."
That's a good start, but to carry on Gord's line of thought, I would add the following omissions:
The rock face (pink area) along the left side of the house (by the curving stairs and forecourt pool);
The lone rock overlapping the right side of the forecourt (your green arrow runs through it);
The living/dining area, Morbius' study, and Krell tunnel entrance (a second extension to the right of center, even larger than the "breezeway");
Whatever cliff or formation the Krell tunnel disappears into.
In addition, we're seeing too much of the far pool. Only about half of it would be visible from this direction.
You've cut your own work out for you, Bud. Let's see what you can really do! _________________ ...or not...
WayneO
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Bud Brewster Galactic Fleet Admiral (site admin)
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Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 12:28 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for the suggestions.
However, some of the details you described would barely be visible, and I wasn't really trying to make the painting completely accurate, just closer to the blueprints in three key ways: the main entrance is the driveway canopy, the house does connect to a cliff, and the pool is correctly positioned in relation to the main entrance.
I actually tried adding some of the landscaping to the far side of the pool, but it didn't look very good, so I went with the bare ground, which at least doesn't have a "patchwork" appearance, way the stuck-in vegetation did.
But I might take another shot it in a few days.
You're right that the pool is too far to the left (and a bit too high), causing more of it to show than if it were placed more accurately. But remember, I initially suggested that the artist deliberately relocated the pool to the right side because he didn't want it obscured by the house. I just wanted to compromise by putting it "closer" to the right place, without hiding too much of it.
So yes, I definitely cheated a little. But my "artistic license" hasn't expired yet, so I can do stuff like that.
Just out of curiosity, what did you mean by this?
"The living/dining area, Morbius' study, and Krell tunnel entrance (a second extension to the right of center, even larger than the "breezeway")."
If you mean that I should actually paint in a new structure and put Morbius' study in the right place relative to the main entrance, that would be little like giving Barbra Streisand a nose job!
The painting has its technical flaws, but we still love it (warts and all, as the say), so I just tried to "rearrange it" a bit, not extensively "repaint it".
The layout of the house is very different from the blueprint, and I just wanted to take the existing features and change them enough to show the house connected to the cliff, thus making the area to the right of the dome the obvious location of the living room and Morbius' study (in this "version" of the house".)
Also, Wayne, I'm not quite clear about what you meant by the statement below.
"Whatever cliff or formation the Krell tunnel disappears into."
The "wing" on the right is supposed to connect to the cliff.
Should I change it somehow to make that more apparent? If so, what change would you suggest? Is the rock around the part of the house against the cliff too dark? I could easily bring the "rock texture" down to replace the dark area, if that would help.
I thought the dark rock might be a good way to call attention to the connection, but if that isn't working, I can change it.
Is that what you meant? _________________ ____________
Is there no man on Earth who has the wisdom and innocence of a child?
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orzel-w Galactic Ambassador
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Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 1:05 pm Post subject: |
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Bud Brewster wrote: | Also, Wayne, I'm not quite clear about what you meant by the statement below.
"Whatever cliff or formation the Krell tunnel disappears into."
The "wing" on the right is supposed to connect to the cliff. |
According to your orientation of the floorplan, establishing the Point of View, the wing of the house on the right that contains Morbius' study and the entrance to the Krell tunnel should be extending toward us on the near side of the dome, rather than away from us on the far side.
It would be similar to the driveway canopy, but larger and mirrored to the right of center instead of the left. It would also have to disappear underground (like into a cliff face) no later than the entrance to the Krell tunnel, since nothing constructed above ground by the Krell remained.
But if you're falling back on "artistic license" to rearrange the floorplan entirely, then anything goes and your version of the matte painting will be even less accurate than the original you're criticizing for not being accurate. _________________ ...or not...
WayneO
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Bud Brewster Galactic Fleet Admiral (site admin)
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Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 1:41 pm Post subject: |
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With respect, sir . . . you just don't get it.
The altered painting assumes we're looking at the front of the house, not the back, based on the fact that the artist placed a driveway canopy on the facing side.
The POV in the painting is just to the right of the driveway canopy / main entrance. The painting appears to have the living room and the study on the far right of the house, and I'm not trying to fix that.
I didn't rearrange the floor plan, Henri Hillinick did.
The preproduction plans and the blueprints have the house joined directly to a cliff. One of the preproduction sketches did this with a section of the house extending to the cliff.
Henri didn't bother with the cliff connection, so I fixed that.
I just changed the painting to show that the right side of the house did in fact join with the cliff, making the section on the far right similar to the two pre-production sketches which show the house joined to the cliff in some manner.
That's the most likely spot for Morbius' study in Henri's drastically different version of the house. It actually IS on the other end of the house, opposite the two entrances and the pool, which is consistent with the floor plan in that one regard.
I'm not asking you to agree with my interpretation. In fact, I wasn't even expecting you to. _________________ ____________
Is there no man on Earth who has the wisdom and innocence of a child?
~ The Space Children (1958) |
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orzel-w Galactic Ambassador
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Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 3:18 pm Post subject: |
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No, I guess I don't get it. It just sounds to me like you're making the matte painting more incorrect than it is by building on a collection of unwarranted assumptions. _________________ ...or not...
WayneO
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Gord Green Galactic Ambassador
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Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 4:07 pm Post subject: |
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Closer?????? _________________ There comes a time, thief, when gold loses its lustre, and the gems cease to sparkle, and the throne room becomes a prison; and all that is left is a father's love for his child. |
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Gord Green Galactic Ambassador
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Posted: Sat Oct 13, 2018 7:35 am Post subject: |
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Maybe that extension is the carport where Robby parks his "Jeep" !
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Bud Brewster Galactic Fleet Admiral (site admin)
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2018 12:54 pm Post subject: |
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Gord Green wrote: | Maybe that extension is the carport where Robby parks his "Jeep" ! |
Krel (David) suggested that too in his PM. That seems reasonable. In fact, it almost looks big enough to be a front entrance canopy and the carport for Robby's hot rod! _________________ ____________
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Gord Green Galactic Ambassador
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2018 1:55 am Post subject: |
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This is a copy of a PM I sent to Bud but I think it's appropriate to share with the forum :
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"I have NO DOUBT that Henri Hillinick 's intention was to paint the front of the house and he did so based on what data he had at the time.
My whole point was that as painted the pool was on the wrong side and he didn't show the entrance as it was shown in the film. The only way that could be resolved was if it was the back/side of the residence and I extrapolated how the two elements (painting and set blueprint) could be resolved. I was going for a reasonable conclusion that verified both interpretations (a "mash-up, as it were).
Both are beautiful works of art: One as a visual representation, the other a draftsman's masterpiece..
Your (Bud's) revision of the painting corrected most of my objections. I'm sure that the painting as shown in the film was only meant to be a fast suggestion of what the area looked like with only a few seconds of screen time.
If we tried to analyze the mattes in THE TEN COMMANDMENTS or any other film we could find all kind of inaccuracies as well.
I think the pool and entrance area are in fact a bit lower than you do. You (Bud) feels the entire building is on a level plane while I feel that it is built with the "back" (Your side) embedded in either a sheer rock ledge (about 8 ft high) or in a slope rising to the level in the paintings foreground. This would account for the rock faces shown on the set and accomadate the rocky area that the Krell tunnel descends into.
Perhaps what I should do is construct a scale model diorama of my concept and photograph it to illustrate my idea. (Hum...Now there's a challenge I just may do. My Brother-in-law is an architect and has all kinds of model stuff.....Maybe I'll do just that!).
Our love for this movie drives us to do this.
We strive to draw reality out of illusion.
I think You, me and Wayne have done exactly that in our own ways. _________________ There comes a time, thief, when gold loses its lustre, and the gems cease to sparkle, and the throne room becomes a prison; and all that is left is a father's love for his child. |
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Eadie Galactic Ambassador
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2018 1:15 pm Post subject: |
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It would be helpful if M-G-M did not destroy the original maquette (a model or mock-up) of the sets that are made for every set in ALL movies since virtually the beginning of the motion picture industry; or if there are any pictures of the set maquettes of Forbidden Planet. Hmmm; Maybe Bud should contact Bill Malone and ask him? _________________ ____________
Art Should Comfort the Disturbed and Disturb the Comfortable.
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Bud Brewster Galactic Fleet Admiral (site admin)
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2018 2:01 pm Post subject: |
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Eadie wrote: | Maybe Bud should contact Bill Malone and ask him? |
Unfortunately, Bill doesn't appear on my friends list anymore. I must have asked him too many questions.
I'll bet he gets a lot of pests like mine. He hasn't answered my LAST question from 2014!
But what the hell, I sent him a message anyway. _________________ ____________
Is there no man on Earth who has the wisdom and innocence of a child?
~ The Space Children (1958)
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Bud Brewster Galactic Fleet Admiral (site admin)
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2018 4:49 pm Post subject: |
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Wayne's illustration with the matte painting / blueprint comparison taught me a new trick, and I tried my hand at it by creating a diagram of the matte painting's version of the house.
I probably made a lot of mistakes, but hopefully the diagram isn't too far off.
Then, just for fun I did this next version, which combines a modified diagram with elements of the actual house blueprints. It's a Frankenstein Monster creation that doesn't really use ALL the elements of the blueprints, of course. I just wanted to see if the floor plan would come even close to fitting.
Results: Not that close, but it was still fun.
Obviously there are areas of the matte painting's floor plan that aren't even used in my drawing below. But those areas could be the locations of the kitchen, Robby's laboratory, etc. And I couldn't quite get the Core to work at the exact center of the circle that represents the dome. Putting it further to the right tended to throw off some other parts around the perimeter.
Notice that I relocated Morbius study so that it connects with the side of the cliff. That was one of the most important changes I wanted to make.
~ Click on the image below to see a bigger version.
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Is there no man on Earth who has the wisdom and innocence of a child?
~ The Space Children (1958) |
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